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Mina
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11, 2012 10:39 pm    Post subject: Misconceptions of Death Reply with quote

A comic im starting on.

of course everyone here knows my deviant art..as many times i've linked to it here lol
http://mina-22.deviantart.com/

the orignal idea for the comic..


Page 1 of the comic. (made too many panels lol so ignore the 2 empty ones. Also i'm sorry if my handwriting is hard to read)


Page 2 (done today 1/11/12, decided to add dailouge after drawn so its easier on the readers)


dunno why i'm posting it here lol just thought i'd share. hope you all like it
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Vhaman
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 12:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This character looks familiar...


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Mina
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Vhaman wrote:
This character looks familiar...

http://i.imgur.com/kTmyC.jpg


mines cuter!

in all honesty though, please, for the love of god dont ever say / do that to anyone who draws stuff..specially when its their own creation. way to take a way a sense of "mine" v lol i dont mean to lash out or anything at you, but i've seen/gotten too many comments before of what my stuff looks like and it ticks me off :l
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry, my bad.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 6:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

.....and here I was expecting a topic thoroughly pointing out deaths misconceptions but instead I got this.

Also characters can in some way look like other characters no matter how "original" it may be so stop whining.

Lastly comic is good but you know what my line is right? Razz


Edit: Have I mentioned typos suck?
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Mina
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 11:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Zalure wrote:
.....and here I was expecting a topic thoroughly pointing out deaths misconceptions but instead I got this.

Also characters can in some way look like other characters no matter how "original" it may be so stop whining.

Lastly comic is good but you know what my line is right? Razz


Edit: Have I mentioned typos suck?


lol i'll whine all i want after hearing comments like that for years Razz i know other characters will look like someone else, but i dont need the obvious pointed out Razz

but yeah, thanks for the compliment..lol I rarely seem to get praise from you so that says alot O: and there is color! black, white and grey Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 6:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Drawing: 9/10
I like the style, very nice handiwork.
Text: 1/10
The weakest point, I can hardly read the stuff that is handwritten, and the others just look weird, far-fetched from the drawing style you apply in the comic. Especially that western-themed "FWOOSH", ROFLMAO. Also there are typos and probably a few grammar errors went in there as well.
Story: N/A.
Honestly, it is just too short to judge now. The idea seems a bit weird though and... Well... Why would someone try to rob a child armed with a huge scythe? O_o
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Mina
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 7:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tsugirai wrote:
Drawing: 9/10
I like the style, very nice handiwork.
Text: 1/10
The weakest point, I can hardly read the stuff that is handwritten, and the others just look weird, far-fetched from the drawing style you apply in the comic. Especially that western-themed "FWOOSH", ROFLMAO. Also there are typos and probably a few grammar errors went in there as well.
Story: N/A.
Honestly, it is just too short to judge now. The idea seems a bit weird though and... Well... Why would someone try to rob a child armed with a huge scythe? O_o


because he's a thug! obviously he's on drugs or something :3

can you point out the grammar errors / typo's?

also - the written text was the orignal lol page 2 was a test for putting text in it so it'd be easier to read. I dont have speech bubbles laid out so it's hard to distinguish text types.. like from speech, to action (hence the lawlfwoosh) and thought, like the last panel.

so im still ..experimenting with the text i suppose lolz having trouble with it.

Story wise - lol it'll get there Smile
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 7:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mina wrote:
Tsugirai wrote:
Drawing: 9/10
I like the style, very nice handiwork.
Text: 1/10
The weakest point, I can hardly read the stuff that is handwritten, and the others just look weird, far-fetched from the drawing style you apply in the comic. Especially that western-themed "FWOOSH", ROFLMAO. Also there are typos and probably a few grammar errors went in there as well.
Story: N/A.
Honestly, it is just too short to judge now. The idea seems a bit weird though and... Well... Why would someone try to rob a child armed with a huge scythe? O_o


because he's a thug! obviously he's on drugs or something :3

can you point out the grammar errors / typo's?

also - the written text was the orignal lol page 2 was a test for putting text in it so it'd be easier to read. I dont have speech bubbles laid out so it's hard to distinguish text types.. like from speech, to action (hence the lawlfwoosh) and thought, like the last panel.

so im still ..experimenting with the text i suppose lolz having trouble with it.

Story wise - lol it'll get there Smile


Capital letters, *'till, *I'm, *is supposed, and I do not know what 'thiving' is, so I'll just assume it is supposed to be 'thriving'. Also, if you are serious about this, you should practice writing, typing, etc. It is perfectly okay with me if people use keyboard shortcuts and don't really pay attention to grammar, but if you entitle yourself to participate in this sort of artistic activity, you should use proper spelling and grammar 24/7. Else you will make mistakes no matter how hard you try, they will be in your habit.
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Mina
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 7:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

LOL yeah its suppose to be Thriving HAHAHA wow. and this is just for friends and watchers on my DA to enjoy. so i dont plan on it ever getting big or nothing, even then i dun get many comments / replies to it. so im just doing it for fun.

thanks for the heads up on my spelling though, i didnt realize i typo'd/spelled some parts XD sometimes i get so into the moment when drawing i just dont think of other things Smile

I do really appreciate the the replies though tsu, V and zal lol and the constructive criticism tsu Smile means alot
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Tsugirai
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 2:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mina wrote:
LOL yeah its suppose to be Thriving HAHAHA wow. and this is just for friends and watchers on my DA to enjoy. so i dont plan on it ever getting big or nothing, even then i dun get many comments / replies to it. so im just doing it for fun.

thanks for the heads up on my spelling though, i didnt realize i typo'd/spelled some parts XD sometimes i get so into the moment when drawing i just dont think of other things Smile

I do really appreciate the the replies though tsu, V and zal lol and the constructive criticism tsu Smile means alot


I am happy to help! Smile
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