A plot for a Animation i want to make

blueinfernal

Alright i have the first 5 scences done so far little diolouge but this is just a rough copy

Terminites
John Connor Day 1 March 18 2189

An 8th grade boy sits in french class. Doodling. Not paying any attention to the teacher. He draws what he likes to call Terminites. The bell is about to ring when the Terminites come to life!!!...

Scene 2
He jumps around trying not to be hit or eaten. He rembers not to drop his favorite pen. He continus to jump around, class laughing and all. No one can see what he sees.
The bell rings
Cut to black

Scene 3 Returns
We come back to see the teacher talking to John. No terminites in sight.
Teacher "John, Why were you running around my room like a maniac."
"Well Mrs. Nite these things i drew come to life..."
Mrs. Nite gives a wierd look
"look ill show you!"
"ok then show me"
John draws a pencil. It comes to life
"See?"
"no your holding nothing..."
He writes something down. Mrs. Nite is attonished she sees nothing to write with but there are words.
"go to your next class John..."
he walks away and the camera moves in and we see what he wrote.
"March 26 2190"
Cut to black

Scene 4
Hes walking to his next class when he relizes what it is. Its art!
"YAY art!!!"
"he rushes to the next class not relizing he forgot his pass from Mrs. Nite. The art teacher Mr. term.
Mr. Term is surprised to see he has no pass so he has to write it down. He tells John what they are doing today and its free draw day...
But you have to draw with pen.
John takes out his pen. And draws. And draws and draws.....
He drew what ever came to mind...
Termites.
The termite suddenly like last time come to life....
They start to scurry around....
No one noticing that they are all over.
.. He relized they cant see them..
So he just lets them be. They start eatting everything in site.
The table suddenly lowrs.
Mr. Term yells at john and calls for a janitor.
The janitor tries to fix it but its no use...

Cut to black

Thats about all i got so far.... Its not the greatest but i like it
this is a Ode to The Terminator Movies....
Hence Terminite.. and John Connor....

if anyone knows how to make animations please send me some info on how to or if you want you can help me out with this... yeah i cant pay but youd be in the credits as 2nd Overlord Of the Movie

Hapideximos · Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:13 am Post subject:

Nice story..

Sry, I draw stick figures and they get taken away by the men in white coats.

Good luck finding arteeests, and free ^bump^ for you..